The best thing about life, Is knowing you put it together

"They look like big strong hands... don't they?"

Water rolls down the skin like tiny beads..
Eyes close so that they might see.
Illum tangendo (touching him)
This sun is a star in someone else's sky
Illum tangendo (touching him)
This moon is making someone cry...
Illum tangendo (touching him)

Captain PirateFace say's "Ahoy!"

Captain PirateFace say's "Ahoy!"
Updated by, Captain PirateFace

The Captain

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Never Say Die!!!





























"the tigers have found me
and I do not care."

Charles Bukowski

there is no fear here

there is no fear here
there is a fear here

Friday, September 28, 2007

somebody likes me...


So, I posted some poetry on Arcadefire.net to see what people thought and I got a lovely message from a user by the name of: shineonucrazydiamond

he wrote in reply to my poetry:

Im a graduate of english lit and lang and spent many years analysing poetry and prose. And Im sorry but this is very very amateur. I write my own stuff which I will probably stick on here eventually, and this stuff reminds me of some old books I have, full of poetry I wrote when I was taking lots of drugs. Its quite soulless and very self indulgent. Too forced. It has no flow...

the post is at: Arcade Fire.Net Forum: Pornography on the Radio

kind of harsh but, I guess he just doesn't dig the Captain is all....

More soulless , self indulgent, forced, no flow poetry hopefully this weekend.




Captain PirateFace

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

People suck!!!

Sheri

Benjamin Hall said...

You can rate poetry?

As long as it's meaningful to you is all that's important.

How can you save me when you can't save yourself?

"nothing can save
you
except
writing.
it keeps the walls
from
failing."

Charles Bukowski